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active voice made parallel to passive voice

by aflaamM589 Wed Feb 17, 2016 6:11 pm

In GMAT SC, we know that passive voice is as likely to be correct as active voice is.
However,is it possible that active voice is made parallel to passive voice?
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Re: active voice made parallel to passive voice

by RonPurewal Sun Feb 21, 2016 6:44 am

any verb can be parallel to any other verb.

it's pretty easy to make sentences like this:
Carl applied to six schools and was accepted by three of them.

where would you get the idea that this isn't ok?
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Re: active voice made parallel to passive voice

by aflaamM589 Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:06 pm

RonPurewal Wrote:any verb can be parallel to any other verb.

it's pretty easy to make sentences like this:
Carl applied to six schools and was accepted by three of them.

where would you get the idea that this isn't ok?


Hello Ron,
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/foru ... t1827.html
here, one of the instructor (JonathanSchneider) wrote that in GMAT this situation is unlikely.
In general situations, your statement seems to be correct but do GMAC put active in parallell with passive?
Thanks in anticipation for clearing things out.
P.S:below in Jonathan's point of view.
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Re: GMAT PREP SC: Single-Family House...

by JonathanSchneider Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:55 pm

It's doubtful that the GMAT would ever have you construct a sentence with an active and a passive in parallel, as your sentence here has it. Moreover, notice that your sentence: 1) doesn't entirely make sense (it is not the houses that are banked, but the structure underneath); and 2) is not very concise: we would want to eliminate the comma and the "was," ideally, from the second part. I don't say this to pick on you, because I think yours is a great question, and I like that you invented this sentence for us to consider. I only bring up these objections because parallelism is not just some abstract rule; rather, it has an actual purpose: to boost clarity and concision at once. When you break parallelism, you are at risk of losing those other elements as well.
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Re: active voice made parallel to passive voice

by tim Sat Mar 26, 2016 9:55 pm

Saying that something is unlikely does not mean it can't happen.
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Re: active voice made parallel to passive voice

by aflaamM589 Sun Mar 27, 2016 6:35 am

Sure.
Thanks for the reply Tim.
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Re: active voice made parallel to passive voice

by RonPurewal Sun Mar 27, 2016 10:37 am

OG 2016 #71