by jlucero Thu Dec 27, 2012 5:33 pm
There's a bunch of idioms here hidden within idioms:
1-
Failed to X (verb)
Failed in Y (noun)
"to" leads into an infinitive verb. So if you want to say you failed at doing something, you'd probably prefer the first expression. If you failed in a task or subject, you'd probably use the second expression.
I failed to run a mile.
I failed in math.
2-
To control X (something)
you wouldn't want "to control for something." you would want "to control X for something." You need to control something. The "for" would tell us why you are controlling it.
Therefore, depending on the meaning of the sentence, you would need to fix up either of your options.
Joe Lucero
Manhattan GMAT Instructor