Grammar Question

[zgordon]

Hi,

Is this proper grammar?:

"By wearing this product next week at the event, you will be helping raise awareness about humanity's ongoing fight against cancer."

If not, what is the best way to say this sentence?

[RonPurewal]

is this related to an actual GMAT item?

remember, this folder is intended to be a place for questions based on GMAT items. (yes, it's called the 'general verbal folder', but the word 'general' is not meant as an invitation for random, source-free questions. rather, 'general' just means 'sources other than MPrep and GMAT Prep'.)

[RonPurewal]

in terms of things this exam would actually test, there's nothing here to see.