by esledge Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:57 pm
You may be recalling OG Verbal Review (1st ed.) #38, where the person doing the action in passive voice is required. But that question had a modifier that would be left dangling without the person; he/she wasn't really required for the sake of the verb.
It's ok to leave the actor unnamed in a sentence in passive voice: The vase was broken.
By whom? Maybe we just don't know...
But this would be incorrect: Using a hammer, the vase was broken.
We may still not know who broke the vase, but we need an answer to "who was using the hammer?", i.e. the "using" modifier needs a logical noun to modify. Without a person in the sentence, it seems to say the vase was using a hammer. Either of the following would be correct:
Using a hammer, someone broke a vase.
The vase was broken by someone using a hammer.
Emily Sledge
Instructor
ManhattanGMAT