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Reducing prepositional phrases

by JbhB682 Wed Jun 09, 2021 11:10 am

Hi Experts - i read in the Manhattan SC guide (6th edition) the following on page 160
Moreover, you should not collapse certain Of-prepositional phrases into Noun-Adjectives.

Whenever you have a time period, quantity or other measurements as the first word, keep the prepositional phrase with of. Also, you should generally avoid using a possessive (s or s') to modify a measurement

Too short) The honeybee population's density
Better) The density of the honeybee population


Could someone please explain the logic for this grammar rule in pink please.

Why is this not preferred ?
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Re: Reducing prepositional phrases

by JbhB682 Wed Jun 09, 2021 11:12 am

Hence would the GMAT consider this wrong ?

Right : Density of Canada is larger than the density of Germany.
Wrong : Canada's density is higher than Germany's density
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Re: Reducing prepositional phrases

by JbhB682 Wed Jun 09, 2021 7:17 pm

Experts - Do you really use this rule quite a bit or is it a grey area ?

Would this really be wrong on the GMAT for example ?


The income of a stockrboker is 50k
vs
A stockbroker's income is 50k
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Re: Reducing prepositional phrases

by esledge Thu Jun 10, 2021 11:46 pm

JbhB682 Wrote:Experts - Do you really use this rule quite a bit or is it a grey area ?
I was unfamiliar with this rule until I saw your post today! Although, as a native speaker, my ear does prefer the "of" example, I just didn't know (or didn't remember reading) that the rule was codified this way.

JbhB682 Wrote:Would this really be wrong on the GMAT for example ?

The income of a stockrboker is 50k
vs
A stockbroker's income is 50k
Even seeing that this is a "rule," I'd hesitate to eliminate the second example just for this. I can recall lots of examples in the OG where a wrong answer has this type of thing, but also some other problem(s).

JbhB682 Wrote:Hence would the GMAT consider this wrong ?

Right : Density of Canada is larger than the density of Germany.
Wrong : Canada's density is higher than Germany's density
To my ear, the "Right" example is better, but both examples here are wrong because a nation can't have a density ... the population of the nation can have a density, so these both need "population" to be clear. But to answer your intended question, consider these:

Right : The density of water is greater than the density of air.
Wrong : Water's density is greater than air's density.

Now the meaning is fine (in both examples), and I do think the GMAT would really consider the "wrong" example incorrect. But again, I suspect it's unlikely to be a stand-alone error like this.
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