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sentence structure- SC MGMAT

by vishalc581 Thu Nov 05, 2015 3:02 am

A new textbook focused on recent advances in artificial intelligence assigned by our
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In SC guide it is written that "The original is a fragment.". How this sentence is fragment. It contains verbs focused and assigned.

Only problem I see is that both the verbs are in same tense so I believe "has been assigned" should work. Is that right?

Please help me.
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Re: sentence structure- SC MGMAT

by Chelsey Cooley Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:19 pm

"has been assigned" would be correct, but it isn't because of tense. The issue here is that "assigned", if it's used as a verb, is an active verb. To use it in the passive form, you need a helper verb, such as "was" or "has been." So, all of these are correct:

The teacher assigned us a fifty-page paper.

A fifty-page paper was assigned by the teacher.

A fifty-page paper has been assigned by the teacher.


The reason the book refers to it as a fragment is that when you see an 'active-looking' verb in a 'passive-looking' context, it actually signals a modifier. Example:

The fifty-page paper assigned by the teacher took me two months to complete.

This is good, because it has the subject 'paper' and the verb 'took'.

The fifty-page paper assigned by the teacher.

This is bad, because it doesn't really have a verb. It just has a subject and a modifier, so it's a fragment.
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Re: sentence structure- SC MGMAT

by vishalc581 Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:40 am

Hi,

so you mean we need was/ has been as helping verb because the sentence is using passive voice?

In the last sentence example you gave, isn't "assigned" acting as a verb?
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Re: sentence structure- SC MGMAT

by vishalc581 Tue Nov 17, 2015 4:37 pm

Instructors can you please have look at my problem.


I see from many days no one is replying to my posts ........is it something like I didn't follow any forum rule and you have added my name in blacklist :lol: :mrgreen:
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Re: sentence structure- SC MGMAT

by tim Sat Nov 28, 2015 4:14 pm

Without the helping verb, it looks like the textbook or the paper assigned something, which makes no sense.

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