by StaceyKoprince Tue Jun 09, 2009 12:03 pm
If you use option D, this is what you've got, stripped down:
...an asteroid (description of asteroid) slammed (info about where it slammed), description of a consequence of the event just mentioned, and it marks...
more simply (stripping out all of the modifiying stuff):
an asteroid slammed, and it marks...
So, the asteroid marks the end of...?
Not the asteroid itself. The fact that the asteroid slammed into the Earth and caused extinctions. But the sentence just says "the asteroid marks..."
Further, because the word "and" separates these two parts of the sentence, the part before and the part after are completely separate. I went to the grocery store and exercised today. Did I exercise in the store? No. These are two separate actions that I took today.
So do you want the info connected - are the events before the "and" connected to the events that happened after the "and"? Or not? Yes, they're connected: the asteroid --> extinctions --> end of an era. So we don't want to separate the two halves with the word "and" because we then lose that connection. So D is no good.
Stacey Koprince
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