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why d is wrong,

by thanghnvn Tue Jul 30, 2013 3:52 am

Reptiles, by drawing their body heat directly from the Sun rather than burning calories to generate it, can survive on ten percent of the nourishment that a mammal of similar size would normally require

A: rather than burning calories to generate it
B: rather than the generation of body heat by burning calories
C: and not from generating it by burning calories
D: instead of by burning calories for generating it
E: instead of body heat generated by burning calories

this is certainly from gmatprep, pack 1 software. oa is a

why D is wrong?
we should used "to do" not "for doing". is that the reason D is wrong?
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Sat Aug 03, 2013 7:26 am

that idiom is wrong there, yes.

there's also the issue of "instead of...", which should be followed by a noun.
(this is not a special construction; it's the same thing you need behind "of" in general.)
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Re: why d is wrong,

by kenchung31 Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:43 am

Hi Ron,

Sorry I have a question that doesn't the pronoun of "it" in choice A create an ambiguous situation and how I should refer "it" to the "body heat" or "the sun" (both are expressed in singular)??

Thanks for your help!!
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Tue Sep 24, 2013 4:06 am

kenchung31 Wrote:Hi Ron,

Sorry I have a question that doesn't the pronoun of "it" in choice A create an ambiguous situation


officially correct answers are not wrong!
do not question them!

far too many students on this forum make the mistake of questioning the correct answers; please note that doing so is a complete waste of your time and effort. i.e., exactly 0% of the time that you spend posting "isn't this official answer wrong?" is productive, and exactly 100% of that time is wasted.

"is this correct?" is NEVER a productive question to ask about one of GMAC's correct answers -- the answer is always yes.
"is this wrong?" / "is this X type of error?" is NEVER a productive question to ask about one of GMAC's correct answers -- the answer is always no.

instead, the questions you should be asking about correct official answers, if you don't understand them, are:
"why is this correct?"
"how does this work?"
"what understanding am i lacking that i need to understand this choice?"

this is a small, but hugely significant, change to your way of thinking -- you will suddenly find it much easier to understand the format, style, and conventions of the official problems if you dispose of the idea that they might be wrong.

and how I should refer "it" to the "body heat" or "the sun" (both are expressed in singular)??


In context, it's obvious that "it" is body heat, and not the sun. Reptiles don't generate the sun by burning calories.

If the noun can be discerned by pure common sense, then it's not "ambiguous".
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Tue Sep 24, 2013 4:25 am

More importantly (and more generally):

* The GMAT does not test "ambiguous pronouns".
Don't worry about them.
There's no upside -- and, as you see here, worrying about them can actually cause you to arrive at incorrect conclusions about things that are tested.
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Re: why d is wrong,

by lindaliu9273 Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:33 pm

Hi Ron,

Can you explain further about the principle of "rather than"?(something like "instead of" can only be followed by noun)

Can it compare noun, verb or clause?

Thank you so much!
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Sun Jun 29, 2014 11:29 am

lindaliu9273 Wrote:Hi Ron,

Can you explain further about the principle of "rather than"?(something like "instead of" can only be followed by noun)

Can it compare noun, verb or clause?

Thank you so much!


This is addressed here (and in the following post):
post88284.html#p88284
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Re: why d is wrong,

by lindaliu9273 Thu Jul 03, 2014 5:45 pm

Thanks a lot
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Wed Jul 09, 2014 11:43 am

lindaliu9273 Wrote:Thanks a lot


Sure.
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Re: why d is wrong,

by Shelley Wed Oct 08, 2014 11:29 pm

RonPurewal Wrote:that idiom is wrong there, yes.

there's also the issue of "instead of...", which should be followed by a noun.
(this is not a special construction; it's the same thing you need behind "of" in general.)




hi Ron,
Would u mind explain why E is wrong?
Thank u very much~~~~~~~~
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Wed Oct 15, 2014 9:35 am

Shelley Wrote:
RonPurewal Wrote:that idiom is wrong there, yes.

there's also the issue of "instead of...", which should be followed by a noun.
(this is not a special construction; it's the same thing you need behind "of" in general.)




hi Ron,
Would u mind explain why E is wrong?
Thank u very much~~~~~~~~


The two methods of getting heat are...
• drawing body heat from the sun
• burning calories to generate it

E is non-parallel.
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Re: why d is wrong,

by Chi HoC263 Thu Mar 26, 2015 9:31 am

Hi Ron,

In correct Ans (A), I am trying to understand why there is no "by" in front of burning calories? is this ellipsis understood? I almost chose Ans (D) because of that.

Ans (A):
"rather than (by) burning calories to generate it"
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:16 am

the parallel structures are "drawing" and "burning". the "by" is not part of the parallel structure.
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:16 am

this whole thing is a non-issue, by the way, unless you have two parallel signals.

e.g.,
This animal lives in grass and trees. (correct sentence; grass || trees)
This animal lives in grass and in trees. (correct sentence; in grass || in trees)
^^ in these two sentences, the ONLY signal word is "and". so, the left-hand part is, basically, whatever is parallel to the right-hand part.

when there are TWO signals, then the parts FOLLOWING those signals must be parallel.
e.g.,
This animal lives in both grass and trees. (correct sentence; grass || trees)
This animal lives both in grass and in trees. (correct sentence; in grass || in trees)
but...
This animal lives in both grass and in trees. (incorrect; grass || in trees)
This animal lives both in grass and trees. (incorrect; in grass || trees)
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Re: why d is wrong,

by RonPurewal Tue Mar 31, 2015 8:18 am

^^ so... if you had "either by drawing... or burning...", that'd be wrong.