Passage Discussion

[Jae HeeK459]

Can someone please make an outline or passage map for this passage? Thank you in advance.

[XiangruC274]

Topic/Scale
ILC's Draft Articles for international watercourse conflicts

Author's VP/Purpose and Author's attitude:
(Paragraph 3) "Though the Draft Articles are a significant step forward..., they are inadequate..."

Paragraph 1
The issue and current solution: "Recognition of the need for international cooperation in efforts to manage and protect rivers has led the United Nations' International Law Commission (ILC) to develop a treaty structure for the uses of international watercourses"

Paragraph 2
The goal and content of ILC's Draft Articles.

Paragraph 3
ILC's Draft Article are inadequate, why? "because they do not provide satisfactory ways of dealing with possible future environmental changes".
An example of such changes --- increased CO2 can cause fluctuations in international river system.

Paragraph 4
Explain how ILC's Draft Articles are inadequate ("not flexible enough")to deal with the river fluctuation.
Suggestions of possible revise.

Hope this helps.