Not bad! Thanks for your post. Let me add my two cents:
The argument is flawed in two ways. First, just because there was a correlation between weight loss, on the one hand, and big breakfasts and high protein, on the other hand, doesn't mean there was a causal connection. Maybe people who exercise a lot tend to eat big breakfasts and eat more protein, but it's the exercise that's causing the weight loss. So we have the very common LSAT correlation-causation flaw.
The other problem, as you pointed out, is that the argument concludes that anyone who follows the diet will lose weight. Even if the causal connection is valid, it is not okay to go from "a group of people" to "anyone."
So (D) is correct because it weakens the causal connection, and suggests that at best, this will only work for some people.
Be careful with your explanations for (A) and (B). We're looking for a flaw, so it would make sense for the answer to go against the conclusion, no?
I would get rid of (A) because although it might give a reason that a different diet would contribute to weight loss, it doesn't affect the conclusion about the high-protein diet.
(B) again suggests that there might be other ways to lose weight, but that doesn't mean the high-protein-big-breakfast diet will or won't work.
(C) is tempting, but it doesn't really have any impact on the conclusion. It just says that there was another factor besides diet that contributed to weight loss. Okay, but will our protein-breakfast diet work?
(E) sort of gives a reason for the results described in the premise; it certainly doesn't undermine the argument.
Thanks for your explanation!
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