JbhB682 Wrote:Can I eliminate option A because of both these 2 reasons
Yes, but I added some comments below.
JbhB682 Wrote:one way) 'staying where it is inserted' in option A is adverbial in nature (because of the comma + ING) and we know that 'staying where it is inserted' is not a RESULT of
The stinger being heavily barbed
Is that a fair elimination strategy for A ?
I agree that this isn't a great cause/effect: I mean,
maybe the "is heavily barbed" is the reason it "stays where it is inserted," but it's not clear.
There's a clearer grammar problem with it: even if the cause/effect logic made sense, the adverbial "staying...inserted" needs to attach to a main clause, but the "As" preposition at the beginning of (A) makes that first part a dependent clause, so no (comma) -ing modifier could attach to it, regardless of meaning.
JbhB682 Wrote:2nd way) 'staying where it is inserted' is in between comma's and thus can be dropped because it is a non essential modifier.
If dropped - option A is now saying
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
This new sentence suggests the stinger has to heavily barded ONLY in order for for the act of stinging to cause an injury.
Is that an fair elimination strategy ?
Of your two reasons, this is the better one! Taking that modifier out reveals that you still have a modifier/meaning issues (your comment).
I'll also add another structure/meaning note. The main clause is not great: "this results." It's not entirely clear what "this" refers to. Putting that aside, it's not a very meaty main clause: All the real action is buried in various modifiers. In contrast, the main clause of (E) is "The ... stinger is heavily barbed and stays ... inserted" which is much more the main idea.